Showing posts with label essay reviewers. Show all posts
Showing posts with label essay reviewers. Show all posts

Friday, December 24, 2010

Essay Reviewer Types


Happy Holidays

Having essays be reviewed is very humbling.  It's weird because I've reviewed my friends essays and when I see how many changes I've tracked it's usually a lot!  But the changes that I suggest are definitely helpful...or so I'm told.  It's funny that I can review my friends essays but have trouble editing my own.  I think that's just the nature of the beast.

In any event I wanted to write this post explaining the differences I've found between essay reviewers.  The key is to find a reviewer that will add the value you need.  And yes... in my opinion this can be the same person.  But here's what I've found - let me know if you agree or if I'm missing any type.

The Grammar Checker - This title is self explanatory haha.  This type of reviewer is very important for me because I can be a lazy writer, hence the title of my blog.  I know I've said it before but I use Ellipses because I'm lazy and for me it's to be used when I complete a thought.  So it's a big help when someone says that a comma should be somewhere or a semi-colon.

sidenote - I got a 5.5 on my AWA.  I was surprised by this since I only spent 15 minutes on each and didn't even check it.

The Negative Nelly - This is the person who reads through the essays and just picks apart everything that they don't like.  They don't give any constructive criticism but just say "Oh I don't like this part" or "Why is this in here?"  What they don't realize is that this is the not the final product yet so it's a work in progress.  But this person is necessary because they keep you on your toes.  I've found that while some of my harshest criticism has come from this type of person, some of my best ideas have blossomed from something this person has said.

The Positive Paulie - This person loves it and everything you've done and thinks you should submit it right now.  When you need a pick me up and someone to just cosign on what you've done, this person should be your go to.

The Suggester - I like this type of reviewer because they point out things and ask questions.  This is the type of reviewer I tend to be.  When I'm reading an essay, I try to understand the direction the person is trying to take the essay in and then I input a lot of questions to fill in the holes knowing that it will get them to their desired finished product.  Me....personally....will never tell someone "I think you should change this essay and write about something else."  I simply won't say it because I don't like when people say that to me.  It's not helpful.  I love when people say "I would have done it ______" because then I think to myself... "Well great... when you're writing your essay then you can write it that way, but clearly I chose to write mine in this manner."

I say all that to just warn people to make sure that the people who are reviewing your essays are providing the right kind of feedback.  Gotta go!  Happy Holidays

Wednesday, December 22, 2010

Business School Essay Monster!

So my pity party is officiall over!  It actually only lasted a day but last night I was too busy working on essays to update my blog.  I’m still semi embarassed by my new score, so even though I claim to disclose everything on my blog, I am not ready to disclose my score just yet.  But like I said on Monday, I did receive my highest Quant score ever, so that’s a plus.  

Meanwhile back at the ranch, now I’m in a position that I never thought I would be in.  Do I take the GMAT a fourth time, knowing that I can get a higher score or do I submit my best essays and leave it at that?  Do I think I could score higher?  Definitely, without a doubt, but the thing about the GMAT is that you need to “show up” on the day that you take it.  My highest Quant score was this past monday and my highest Verbal score was  in October when I took it.  Had I matched my verbal score this time around, I would be content, because I would have gotten at least a 650.  

But honestly, I’m not going to dwell on it now.  Actually, that’s a big fat lie because anyone in my position knows that now my brain is racing trying to contact everyone possible to determine whether or not to take it for an uncoveted 4th time.  I know that it’s frowned upon to take it again, but when you hear from X,Y, and Z person that you should take it again, you start to believe it.  In any event, I’m not allowing myself to think about the GMAT until after I’ve submitted my applications.

So that’s where I am now.  I am an essay monster right now!  Last night I was arguing with Osirus (yes B, I called you out) over what I should do regarding the GMAT, and then we got into the topic of essays.  I sent him the video to the first version of my Tuck video essay and he gave me some feedback.  I actually have two versions of this video because I wasn’t sure which direction I wanted to take it.  He gave me feedback and said that he would have liked to see/hear more of my come through in the video and it triggered something in my head.  We had this discussion at 3am, and when he said that I started working on the video again until 4am.  Anyone who knows me knows that my best work is done between the hours of 12am and 3am.  Maybe that’s when I should have studied for the GMAT.

Productivity during those hours has always been at it’s best for me ever since high school.  I can’t explain it, nor do I try to explain it any more it’s just me!  But yeah so I worked on my essay for about an hour and got it to where I think it needs to be.  Had I not been arguing with him, I would have not gotten to the point where he made the comment he made so everything happens for a reason right?

Aside from that video essay, I’ve also almost completed two of my Consortium Essay questions.  I sent them off to my reviewers and went through a couple of rounds.  I have a friend who loves to look over my essays, oddly enough, and I love sending them to her haha.  Once I edit the essays after talking to her, I send the essay off to my other reviewer - aka my veritas consultant (from the package I won last February via BeatTheGMAT). I sent two essays to her today and got feedback on both.  I’m waiting on feedback on one of my other essays from my friend who got into Chicago as well.  He understands my story and what I’m trying to portray with this specific essay so who better to have review it for me?

So right now I’m solely focused on my essays. I have bits and pieces of essays done because I’ve worked on them previously, so now it’s actually relieving to be able to work on them hard core.  Knowing that I’ll be hitting submit in less than 2 weeks!  I cannot wait - granted I don’t know what’s going to occur post submission, but to be able to hit submit will feel sooooooo good!

Typing Fast


Sunday, December 12, 2010

Countdown: Day 24

As per yesterday, here was the plan for today:


- Finish Consortium Essay - IT WILL NEVER BE FINISHED
- Send Consortium Essay to reviewer - CHECK
- Study Quant for 3 hours - CHECK 
- Finish Dartmouth Video Essay - WORKED ON IT
- Study Verbal - #FAIL
- Watch Wall Street 2 (Bootleg DVD) - CHECK

The plan for today is as follows:
- Study Study Study 


Saturday, December 11, 2010

Countdown: Day 25

As per yesterday, here was the plan for today:

- Morning commute - Verbal - CHECK
- Lunch time - Verbal - CHECK 
- Evening commute - Nap - CHECK 
- Evening - Quant - CHECK

The plan for today is as follows:

- Shower
- Finish Consortium Essay 
- Send Consortium Essay to reviewer
- Study Quant for 3 hours
- Finish Dartmouth Video Essay
- Study Verbal
- Watch Wall Street 2 (Bootleg DVD)


 
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